Slightly unfinished.
Page 1
Panel 1 – Suited people sitting around a table, talking and smoking.
Man 1 – How have the orange groves been growing lately? They doing well?-
Man 2 – You always ask that and I always tell you, they’re doing just fine. You can trust me with your business, partn-
Panel 2 -
Man 1 – Yea yea, I can trust you, but you can’t blame me for worrying. One screw up and we’ll lose more than just a yearly quota.
Panel 3 -
Man 3 – It’s your deal, dammit, did you guys come here just to talk ‘bout work or did we come to play cards?
Man 2 – Someone’s eager to move on, think I’m gonna fold.
Panel 4 -
Man 1 – Same here, oh and make sure you don’t fold on our trade with the McKenzie’s.
Man 3 – Bloody pussies.
Man 2 – I’m not a fan of losing money, but I’ll trust you this once when you say that it’ll benefit me in the long run.
Panel 5 -
Man 1 – Don’t worry, I did the numbers on this man.
Man 3 – Time you started counting your own numbers, can’t count on you to run a business if you can’t count.
Man 2 – Shut uuup.
Page 2 –
Panel 1 – Dealing the cards again
Man 1 – How’s the wife and kids?
Man 2- Good hand, good hand.
Panel 2 -
Man 3 – What are you really trying to ask me?
Panel 2 -
Man 1 – Nothing really, you just seem like you had a problem with somethin’ all day. Finals was around this week wasn’t it-
Man 2 – Hated that shit.
Pane 3 -
Man 1- How’d your daughter do?
Man 3 – Dumb pig, either she sits on her ass ‘home or she’s out somewhere with some boy. Don’t know what she expects to be in the future.
Panel 4 -
Man 1 – Night Consoler?
Man 2 – Maybe an artist?
Man 1 – Oh, an artist’s something right?
Man 3 – Both’s worth fuck all.
Obviously, I took some liberties as to "whose" common life I was slicing from and did a typical shady conversation.
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